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mayday65 June 8 2009, 16:25:14 UTC
just a start... nothing much going on, smooth writing if ignoring all the errors. Really need beta.

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wasurenaide_3 June 8 2009, 17:57:14 UTC
Well, I think the story has promise, but I think you need a beta. Seriously. It was kindof hard to follow. I mean, I got it, but better grammar would help. =D

Good job, can't wait to see where this goes. Sounds good!

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tofuvanilla22 June 9 2009, 13:30:06 UTC
oh thank you so much!:)) i'm working on it though!:D i promise, i'll work even harder for the next chapters, and i hope you can guide me here cause i need a little help..n_n if it doe'nt bother you.
i'm a new user and i really don't know what beta means.?_?

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