Well, I think the story has promise, but I think you need a beta. Seriously. It was kindof hard to follow. I mean, I got it, but better grammar would help. =D
Good job, can't wait to see where this goes. Sounds good!
oh thank you so much!:)) i'm working on it though!:D i promise, i'll work even harder for the next chapters, and i hope you can guide me here cause i need a little help..n_n if it doe'nt bother you. i'm a new user and i really don't know what beta means.?_?
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Good job, can't wait to see where this goes. Sounds good!
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i'm a new user and i really don't know what beta means.?_?
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