Am I Hot or Not?

[toiletseat_girl]

I'm fairly new (a complete and utter n00b) at this whole role playing thing, so please let me know how George is doing, any tips for improvements, ideas for plots, cheesecake recipies, whatever.

Comments

[anonymous]

I've been wanting to crit you for a while, but you never reply to the concrit posts. So I'm glad to see this here! (I just hope it's not so old that you forgot it!)

Basically, my big problem with George is that she's, well... not George anymore. She's just another random 18 year old girl who likes to party, which really makes no sense if you sit and think about it.

This is a girl who spent eighteen years of her life, letting it pass her by. Even after she died, she still maintained that apathy to some extent. Your George is not only not apathetic, she's downright outgoing. And unfortunately, most of her outgoingness involves either drinking or complaining. And while, yes, it's IC for her to bitch, I don't really see how it's IC for her to whine as much as she's been prone to in camp

[anonymous]

This is a different anon, but... well, the first anon covered most of what I would have said. Not to gang up on you, but your voice could use some serious work.

[anonymous]

Of course she never replies to the crit posts. Then, she might actually get concrit like this, which she doesn't want. All she wants to hear is how good she is and not the bad points, which almost every RPer has at one point or another.

[anonymous]

And I think every RPer has the right to choose that. The concrit com is an offer, not an obligation for us. If she would shun concrit completely, this post wouldn't exist, after all.