Hetalia: One Flower A Day

[tokene]

Title: One Flower A Day
Rating: T
Genre: Historical
Characters/Pairings: Korea, Japan. No pairings.
Summary: Korea does his own part for the rebellion, with one flower a day.
Words: 536
Notes: Written for hetalia_contest 's week 23 prompt, "flowers".

Comments

[overturondole]

One good deed a day. Wait, that sounds familiar.

Anyway. As mentioned in that Very Anonymous Chat, I like the whole flow of the story, with little nuggets of information throughout. This covers plenty for 536 words.

Pity I can't talk about characterisation.

Woo. My first (semi-)official crit. Haha.

[Side-note: Just realised that one of the writers I admire writes in the present tense, and this is in present tense, so... Yeah.]

[tokene]

It does? Sounds rather foreign to me. But you know, poor memory.

Hahah, thanks. Research was fun.

You gave me crit before, I think. Or at least a comment. I think it was for Pontianak, or Facepalm? Can't remember.

[Aaah. Really? I see.]

Thanks :D

[whitesin]

I always do love reading about Korea's snarky side... he never strikes me as a typical snarker but he gets his meaning across effectively, when push comes to shove. Translation: when he wants to piss you off, he will end up pissing you off.

What I especially love is his mockery of "aniki." It always makes me wince when an otherwise well-written story has Korea addressing China as such.

I'm rather flattered that you got inspiration from a somewhat long-ago fic of mine...

[tokene]

Hahah yes, persistent he is &hearts I'm glad I got that across~

Yes, well, he was probably forced into it, so I can see why he's so displeased :l I got that idea from halcyon's fic, anyway. And I agree! It does seem a little unnatural for him to address China that way...

O: That kinkmeme fill is yours? If it is, then I have to say that I absolutely love that piece *_* And no, it's not my glasses-kink talking right now.

[whitesin]

Head canon: He does all that business with groping China and Japan to deliberately piss them off.

^_^ Very much so. Ah, thank you very much~ And there's absolutely nothing wrong with a glasses kink, being that I'm absolutely guilty of such as well.

[tokene]

Ahahah. I totally did not think of it that way.
But hell yeah &hearts Korea must have more going on in his head than others think.

I-It's embarrassing! > // < But in this fandom, every other person seems to have a kink, so lol

[windxalchemist]

Oh gosh. I do think I love this♥ Thanks for writing something through Korea's point of view that is actually poignant and although not terribly detailed or verbose it gets its point across very very well.

Also, I just love reading about this time period in Korean history in general, and even more so when it's well done. Thanks for the lovely read♥

[tokene]

Ahh, I'm so glad that I pulled off his perspective well enough to satisfy ;_; I was so terribly worried that I wouldn't, especially since I don't usually like how Korea is portrayed in most fanfics.

:D Thank you very much for reading! Glad to hear you enjoyed it!

[midori_lover]

ah I love this ♥ This story just flows so well. And I love how you wrote Korea's point of view here. I rarely see Korea's poignant side in other fics. Thanks for the beautiful fic! ♥

[tokene]

Thank you so much :D

I'm glad it worked for you. And yes, we do see too little of sensible!Korea.

[sweetfragrance9]

It was really good ^^ Nice job. Good luck with the contest! ^^ I might join.... it depends... But still good luck. The best writer wins ^^

[tokene]

Thank you!

And good luck to you too, if you decide to join~

[sweetfragrance9]

No problem ^^