Hetalia: Tomato-Red

Jan 15, 2010 22:51

Title: Tomato-Red
Rating: PG (some blood?)
Genre: Angst
Characters/Pairings: Romano, Spain | No pairings
Summary: The reality of Spain's trips away from home hits Romano. Hard.
Notes: Fill from the kinkmeme, the request was for Little Romano realising for the first time just what Spain goes through for him and very emotionally showing him gratitude ( ( Read more... )

fanfic, *hetalia, one-shot, kinkmeme

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inuyashacooks January 15 2010, 15:09:43 UTC
"I don't care about tomatoes," Romano chokes out, throwing himself into Spain's left shoulder, hands wrapped around him as far as they can reach.

;_; awwwwwwwww.

:'D that was really good. all the right amounts of cute and sad & etc :D

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tokene January 15 2010, 15:11:42 UTC
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Thank you! This was another one of my on-a-whim-at-3am fics so I was worried it'd come off as not very well planned 8D;;

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xoxostarrydust January 15 2010, 15:53:29 UTC
O-Oh dear, I think I might be in tears.
You did a great job writing this, it flowed so well that I found it almost impossible to stop reading once I started. I personally really enjoyed the irony with Romano's innocence in the beginning and all the references to the color red (I'm kinda odd and enjoy that stuff, blame my literature teacher). And I can't forget the adorable ending, so like Romano~ So overall I give you a 10000/10. And I'm totally going to stalk the rest of your work. :3

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tokene January 15 2010, 16:04:18 UTC
/tissues

T-Thank you! I'm a literature student myself, so I somehow find most of my pieces having running-themes throughout them ahah.

Aww, thank you again aha. I'm so very very glad that you enjoyed it. And I hope the rest of my work continues to do so as well? :3

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midori_lover January 15 2010, 16:10:29 UTC
"I don't care about tomatoes," Romano chokes out, throwing himself into Spain's left shoulder, hands wrapped around him as far as they can reach.

I-I think my heart broke at this line. ;~;

Good job!

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tokene January 15 2010, 16:11:55 UTC
It's a pretty huge proclamation coming from Romano, eh XD

Thank you! :3

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starlightfairy2 January 15 2010, 19:25:01 UTC
I just died of sadness. ;____________; You. You my friend are really good at creating images, pictures. This whole thing played out in my head. And Romano. Oh Romano. I just want to put him in my arms and comfort him. The same with Spain. Porque sufres tanto?

Oh goodness, that's so sad...

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tokene January 16 2010, 07:27:54 UTC
O-Ohh, thank you > w < A lot.

Go, hug him silly! Hug them both.

Thanks you again &hearts

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uwahblood January 15 2010, 23:17:13 UTC
That was wonderful, even if it brought me to tears for like 10 minutes - and this is coming from someone who hasn't cried in months.

Beautiful ♥

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tokene January 16 2010, 07:28:37 UTC
Ahhh, thank you so much! I'm glad to hear that it's touched you, in one way or another.

(I'm sorry you cried though. -gives tissues-)

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uwahblood January 16 2010, 14:44:13 UTC
You're welcome <3!

[Oh no, I don't mind for them ;; They're my otp so <3 C:]

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tokene January 16 2010, 14:45:55 UTC
(They're slowly becoming my OTP too but shhh... No one knows that yet XD)

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