Comments | tokene: Pivot: Leave Or Stay

tokene

Pivot: Leave Or Stay

Jul 09, 2009 23:22

Fandom: Fruits Basket
Collection/Title: Pivot- Leave Or Stay
Rating: T+ (implied sexual acts)
Summary: With each decision, the pivot swings differently. AkitoxShigure. Because love is about the one who leaves first.
Author: tokene

Leave or Stay

I don't own Fruits Basket, and it all belongs to Natsuki Takaya. Spoiler warning for the story below

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-pivot, fanfic, *fruits basket

Comments 6

heterodog July 9 2009, 16:00:30 UTC

Oh man that was great! I'm looking forward to reading more.

tokene July 9 2009, 16:02:40 UTC

Aha, thank you very much! :D

animeg3282 July 10 2009, 19:18:19 UTC

while this was very good, at first I had a hard time with Shigure ever calling Akito as a grownup 'chan',[maybe because I've never seen it before in the manga] and of course, I had to change the style to mine so I could read it. Maybe you should write more, if you have time.

tokene July 11 2009, 11:36:34 UTC

Aha, I took some writers' liberties with that one P: The version of Fruits Basket I read doesn't use the honorifics, and I thought Shigure would be somewhat playing (toying? Maybe teasing. Probably teasing.) with Akito at that point.

Ah? Style? Just curious, what's that? o:

Hahah, I probably will, soon enough. Thank you for your comments! :D

animeg3282 July 13 2009, 00:24:58 UTC

Ah, I see. In mine they do have honorifics. I mean that your journal seems to have tiny text and it's grey on white. People like me can't read it well at all.

tokene July 13 2009, 12:54:52 UTC

Aah. I see I see. Mine was an official (publisher-version) translation, so somehow, I went without the honorifics. Hmm. I'll have to look into the whole honorifics issue some time then.

Oh dear. I'm very sorry about that, then D: I just really liked the layout, as plain as it is, and didn't really take that into consideration. Maybe I will, next time, when I pick a new layout ^^;;