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I'm lame and have no idea what to call this fic so...OTL
I just...haven't written anything in so long and suddenly, voila, I have a random idea and I just had to...write it before I lost it again. If anyone can, or wants to, think of an appropriate title for me...then go right ahead. Forgive me, because it's incoherent, pointless, rusty and most ( Read more... )
I just...haven't written anything in so long and suddenly, voila, I have a random idea and I just had to...write it before I lost it again. If anyone can, or wants to, think of an appropriate title for me...then go right ahead. Forgive me, because it's incoherent, pointless, rusty and most ( Read more... )
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THERE IS JUST -- THERE IS SO MUCH I LOVE ABOUT THIS FIC THAT IT'S IMPOSSIBLE TO PUT INTO WORDS, SO I'LL GIVE YOU SNIPPETS.
BUT FIRST AND FOREMOST - YOUR POV. GOKUDERA'S POV. I ADORE HOW YOU WRITE HIM BECAUSE THE CHARACTERIZATION IS SO HIIIIM. JUST HFNNNGH ♥ IT LETS ME GET INTO HIS HEAD, AND HE'S SO TANGIBLE THAT WAY, MORE LIKE A HUMAN BEING THAN PRETTY WORDS ACCOMPANYING A FADED PICTURE; IN SHORT, IT'S JUST.. AUUUGH IT'S FLAWLESS.
AND RYOHEI. I HAVE SPAMMED YOU ABOUT THIS BUT RYOHEI OH MY GOD IS THE BEST THING EVER. EVER. I WANT HIM AT MY OWN WEDDING, I WANT HIM TO TELL STORIES ABOUT MARRYING TEDDY BEARS, FGSLHDKS ♥♥♥ OH U, RYO.
AND THE PAIRING HINTS. OH MY GOD. THE 1886. THE D18. MY GOODNESS WOMAN, YOU KNOW I LOVE YOU FOR IT. ♥♥♥
'Bastard was gonna get laid too, about fucking time really, the Italian couldn't help but think as Yamamoto discreetly pulled him into the room; uptight fucking bastard.'
^^^^ THE BEST LINE. EVER. EEEEEEEEE I LOVE YOUR GOKUDERA SO MUCH ( ... )
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Your comments never fail to make me SPAZGRIN. /must have read this comment like four times today
Thank youuu so much and ahaha that D18 was so for you, YOU KNOW IT ALWAYS IS
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Not at all, love. ;v; And PFFT I LOVE YOU FOR IT, YOU KNOW. >u< ♥ /fans self
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I love how much raw emotion you've put into their characterizations, how you amplified exactly who they are through Gokudera's eyes. With every single person you focused on what he saw the most about them, Tsuna and Kyoko's happiness, Haru's desperation, Hibari's asshole-ness...etc.
I hope you continue to de-lurk and write~
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I'll definitely try and not lurk anymore. Cx;
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OH MY GOD DEAR
YOU DE-LURKED, FINALLY. AND WITH MAGIC TOO.
Seriously this fic was wonderful AND I DON'T EVEN CARE THAT I READ THIS AT SCHOOL.
I was getting mad at Gokudera for not doing anything when YAMAMOTO OBVIOUSLY LOVED HIM but then everything worked out in the end.
LOL um you have now idea how happy I was when I realized you wrote this. /fan
I could go on, but I lack a legitimate keyboard so...
EXCELLENT WORK AS ALWAYS<3
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BAD GIRL, DO YOUR DAMN SCHOOL WORK; NO READING PORN.
Either way, thank you very muchly! >3< ♥
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You're welcome~!
WHAT IS IN THAT ICON I SEE THERE.
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The start of this was some kind of wonderful, honestly. No matter how bittersweet, I loved the Haru-Dera moments, I loved the Haru-Hibari moments, the way you write Gokudera tears me up inside every time. And Ryohei made me ULTRA MEGA FUCKING HAPPY. You really captured his retardedness. <3
The sex broke my heart, which I don't say often, really, and along with that, it even managed to be them. And hot, obv.
TO SUMMARIZE SOME BS: You make me hurt. In an awesome way. I've seriously missed your fic, so you can imagine how glad I am to read 9000 words from you again.
/APPLAUDS
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al;kfka your comments make me ULTRA MEGA FUCKING AWESOME HAPPY. Always. ALWAYSSSS.
Thank you so much, it really means a lot that someone would actually miss my writing. ♥
/eternally grateful
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