[Fic] Dictionary of Difficult Words

May 09, 2010 23:19

Woo, first piece for 8059smutweek  /o/

and wtf, my writing is getting worse again OTL

Title: Dictionary of Difficult Words
Prompt: Words
Rating: NC -17
Word Count: 2148
Warnings: Uhm...a short bit of smut, language and...that's about it.
Summary: There are...a lot of words I find difficult to say. Like they get stubbornly caught on the grooves of your teeth, flapping ( Read more... )

#khr, !8059, fanfiction, more writing no-one needs to read

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nimuu May 10 2010, 17:13:31 UTC
Okay, so. It's hard to refrain from writing the long ass ode of love to you that I could, because damn. I don't know, I've always loved how you make them, dysfunctional but trying and so so adorable. And your Yamamoto's continuously playing the sweetheart who puts up with a shitstorm cheers me up because as of late all I've been reading are fics that are angsty 8059 where Yamamoto's hetero or in love with Squalo or just kind of a dick, but thanks for reassuring me he's still the nicest guy on the planet. And Gokudera, pfft, no matter what style you write him in he's infinitely loveable, and here with him completely vulnerable and apologetic made my heart break a little. Everything he can't say and little bits of sibling love and Tenth love, it was great. And the end of this makes me fall for these two all over again.

so this is ridiculously gay and special - AND LONG FFFFFFFFF - but i just thought you should know, i love you and your writing and this awesome fic. <33 not to mention le porn.

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tokidoki_hime May 11 2010, 16:34:07 UTC
beautiful comment is so beautiful *A*

Yamamoto ...kind of a dick? What blasphemy is this? H-He...noooo- D':

flavdsg;d; your comments make me so hideously happy; I love you and your comments and everything else. Thank you so much love. <333

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z_hard May 11 2010, 14:43:37 UTC
Beautifully written! They're so IC and how you describe Gokudera's feeling was just perfect. The ending was good, too! \o/

Thank you for made something epic!! CX

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tokidoki_hime May 11 2010, 16:35:05 UTC
Wow, thanks so much! I'm so glad it seemed IC and...that you enjoyed it of course!

Thanks for reading! ♥

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