Mad About You - EliXander & SooBum - U-KISS - Chapter 3

[tokidokiko]

Title: Mad About You
Author: tokidokiko
Genre: AU, Comedy, Romance
Rating: PG14
Pairings: Both Main - Eli/Alexander & Soohyun/Kibum
Character Summary: Eli is the so-called "playboy". Soohyun is the gym trainer. Alexander is the towel boy. Kibum is the wannabe "Mr. Muscle Man". Kevin is the friendly guy. Kiseop is the clumsy guy. And Dongho is the

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[yakiseop]

/SOBS UNCONTROLLABLY WHILE HUGGING THIS FIC TIGHT.
I love this fic so much that it's ridiculous. Really. ♥♥♥♥ ;3;
THE ELIXANDER PARTS JUST MAKE ME SQUEAL I'm sorry this is the truth. I cannot control myself.

"I suddenly had an image of you in one of those short little white nurses uniform dresses with a white hat that had a red cross on it. And thought 'eww'."
YOU KNOW YOU LIKE IT, BOUYA.

The Soobum development is so cute that tears come to my eyes, really. They'e just. So. laksjlasjlka Ç_Ç ♥♥♥ Kibum trying to be a manry man, Soohyun worrying about the poor boy's health.

"It's just...," he said, biting on his bottom lip, concerned. "I don't know if I'm allowed to go home with you."
THIS JUST KILLED ME ROFLMAOMG. SOOHYUN, I LOVE YOU.

I'm trying my best not to turn this on a giant monstruous comment. ):
You are the best, writer! I love you! Fighting! \*3*/

BTW! Here's the pic. Cute, isn't it? ♥♥

[tokidokiko]

i think i saw that ficcie before o(>.>)o
I just love Soohyun's way of words XD

Thank you for the cute EliXander piccie <3

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[tokidokiko]

THank you !

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[anca_chan]

Of course Kibum wants Soohyun to train him. I mean hell, who wouldn't. Though he does like to show off a bit, doesn't he?
Alexander squinted at the person who called him then he squinted at the thing the person was hold up to him. Then he cheered. "Aa! You found my glasses." -> I was eating popcorn while reading the chapter and chocked while going through this line. I laughed with tears. It was so dorky and nerdy. XD

[tokidokiko]

well, the boys did work hard for those abs and muscles~
I could totally see Alexander doing that XD

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[doomedpassion]

Kibummie's kind of...forward? and there are some typos and the first elixander segment was hilarious!!!! I like how you built the atmospheres in each segment as well...this was great, but please read over your work to fish out the typos. these mistakes always happen so i won't hold it against you. =)

[tokidokiko]

thanks for the suggestions. -.-;; it tends to happen with me~

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[saikia2]

more more plz!!!!!!!!!! ^^

[tokidokiko]

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