FIC - CAPTIVATION (17/?)

[relentlessfire]

TITLE: Captivation
AUTHOR: Rina
GENRE: Kidnap-fic. Angst. Hurt/Comfort. Twincest.
RATING: NC-17 (Controversial themes, abduction, psychological drama, some violence, semi-forced sex acts, slash, eventual incest. No rape)
PAIRINGS: Tom/Bill, Bill/OMC, Tom/OMC
SUMMARY: A terrified Bill is abducted by someone he believes to be a crazy, obsessed fan.

Comments

[kseenaa]

Now that was sexy. I love sex-talking like that and you wrote it very well. I bet Tom's brain broke somewhat just now... *lol* Awesome! :-D

[relentlessfire]

Thank you! Yep, Tom's not sure what to think anymore... :P

[videocrash]

Quote: "“There’s nothing sick about loving someone, especially not your own twin.” " YESSSS!!!! Ooops, excuse my enthusiasm but I used to write on the same subject because I believe deep, understanding love must be that one.
At first, Bill saying such things made me think he went totally crazy (Bill-talking-like-that? Not even in a million year LOL) but then I understood what I suppose it's his "evil" plan. He said exactly what he knew would be the right words to say to end with his real own words ;) Brilliant!
My theory is he's not been brainwashed by Koji. Koji just opened the lid of the pot that was already boiling (and he must have known it).
Now another mystery awaits... Will they get distant beyond reconciliation or will Tom understand Bill's point of view?

Another great one, Rina! (sorry, I read it days ago but I'm commenting only now :P )

[relentlessfire]

You're right - Bill wouldn't normally talk like that but he had to get Tom's attention somehow. He's tricksy like that ;)

Exactly; Koji wouldn't have taken either of them if he didn't suspect the attraction was already there. As for Tom...he probably still thinks this is all Koji's brainwashing so he won't fully accept what Bill said yet. Thanks for your views!