FIC - CAPTIVATION (19/?)

[relentlessfire]

TITLE: Captivation
AUTHOR: Rina
GENRE: Kidnap-fic. Angst. Hurt/Comfort. Twincest.
RATING: NC-17 (Controversial themes, abduction, psychological drama, some violence, semi-forced sex acts, slash, eventual incest. No rape)
PAIRINGS: Tom/Bill, Bill/OMC, Tom/OMC
SUMMARY: A terrified Bill is abducted by someone he believes to be a crazy, obsessed fan.

Comments

[kseenaa]

Ha ha ha! That is so cool! :-D Hopefully Koji's plan will work. :-) He must be damn rich to be able to set something up like that.

Somewhat heartbreaking there from Tom though... I do understand where he is coming from, but damn... that was somewhat desperate of him, wasn't it? Poor kid...

I like the switch that has happened lately in this fic. It is more and more proved that even though Tom acts the tougher one? He really really isn't. Bill is. And in this situation, he shows it. :-) Well written that!

Also happy to see that Koji is effected by the twins to. ;-) He should be.

[relentlessfire]

Yeah, Koji's got some spare cash squirreled away because he doesn't spend much on himself! Although, all those games machines are probably just rentals...lol

Tom is pretty desperate. I'm glad you can see how I'm making Bill the tougher one in this situation. It would have been so easy to have him be the weak one and cling to Tom for support but I like to see it the other way for a change.

Thanks for your reviews!

[kseenaa]

I actually prefer fics where Bill is the stronger one. I kinda despise fics where he is all femme and dependable and can't do jack for himself... That don't feel like the Bill we see in interviews and online nowadays. :-P