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FIC - CAPTIVATION (20/?)

Jun 23, 2013 17:04

TITLE: Captivation
AUTHOR: Rina
GENRE: Kidnap-fic. Angst. Hurt/Comfort. Twincest.
RATING: NC-17 (Controversial themes, abduction, psychological drama, some violence, semi-forced sex acts, slash, eventual incest. No rape)
PAIRINGS: Tom/Bill, Bill/OMC, Tom/OMC
SUMMARY: A terrified Bill is abducted by someone he believes to be a crazy, obsessed fan. ( Read more... )

Comments 8

myr_juhl June 23 2013, 08:01:23 UTC

Oh, my goodness Rina, this is happening fast! (thank you ;) )

I just read the past two chapters and I'm blown away by the sensuality and the way everyone is changing by this experiment.

I still feel compassion for Tom. This is so so hard for him to wrap what's happening around his brain and Bill is not gentle. He pushes for all he's worth- 1. he wants to get out, and 2. He wants Tom.

In a way, it's a brilliant combination for Bill. I suppose the kidnapping was a blessing for him and a curse for Tom. Tom would have lived happily ever after not knowing he was attracted to his twin, but now it can't be helped. He has to come to terms with his feelings and I look forward to that - so I'll dash in and read this chapter.... now ;)

relentlessfire June 23 2013, 08:16:50 UTC

Yes, things are finally happening. I think they have waited long enough... ;)

Thanks so much - hope you enjoy this new update!

myr_juhl June 23 2013, 08:36:19 UTC

Okay... that was the kind of tension I like. I loved Koji's focus on the different way the twins behaved that night. He was really sweet on Tom's fangy smile ;)

You did a great job describing that game room. I wish I was there to explore the fun as well :)

Cliff hanger was very clever. Bill finally managed to wind up Tom to get the point he'd yearned for for so long.... I'll be looking forward to what happens next. I simply can't imagine what *s* ;)

relentlessfire June 25 2013, 03:39:47 UTC

Tom's fangy smile is adorable, isn't it? :)

Yeah, that games room would be so much fun to play in! I love zombie shooting games XD

I'm glad you enjoyed the tension and you won't have to wait long to find out what they do next! Thanks for reading, Myr!

kseenaa June 23 2013, 19:41:59 UTC

Nice! :-D Very funny! X-D Quite hilerious actualy what with the drunken twins. And also, of course, finally Tom. ;-) Took you long enough. Although, I suspect he'll feel like shit about it in the morning. Well, that and the hangover. ;-)

I only have one little constructive ctitisme...

This: Here Tom launches into a screeching, out of tune, “There’s no re-EEEEAL love in you,” sounding like a thirteen year old kid whose voice is just breaking as he enters puberty

Now I would think that this fic takes place BEFORE Automatic came out, hmm? ;-) Especially considering how you've been describing Tom and Bill in this fic so far. It kinda fucked with my head there when you all of a sudden threw in lyrics from the Humanoid album. ;-) Just saying.

relentlessfire June 25 2013, 03:46:02 UTC

Oh! You're right - this story is set a few months before Automatic came out so yeah, probably coulda picked another song there. Oops! Hopefully, you're the only one that's noticed though... :P

I really appreciate that you've been reading this fic, even though twincest isn't your thing. So, if you decide not to read the next chapter, or review it, I do understand because it's gonna be all about the twincest. I know how hard it is to review something you don't enjoy so you really don't have to. You can skip it if you like; I won't be offended! There will be more interesting stuff to do with Koji in further chapters so I hope you stick around for that. :)

kseenaa June 27 2013, 20:09:02 UTC

Only a few months? I thought this was set during the Scream-era (when they were in the USA)? That's the impression I've got during the entire fic when you've described the twins. Oh well.. :-P

And that's right. I only read twincest if the story is really interesting. ;-) And yours is. So there we go. ;-)

relentlessfire June 28 2013, 09:26:52 UTC

I don't really know exactly when this fic is set (which is why I haven't said) - only that it's BEFORE they change their style, before Bill gets those dreadlocks he had in Automatic, and before Tom changes to his black braids. I'm not sure exactly when that was as I've only been a fan since 2010 so I'm kinda guessing here... *does a quick search*

Yeah, you're probably right. It must be set during 2008, then. So Tom wouldn't have been singing Automatic. Again, oops. :P

Aw, thank you. It means a lot that you'll still read it anyway! <3