The end of the drought - drabble (TSFF)

Mar 15, 2014 03:32

Title: The end of the drought
Author: Amdee
Pairing: None
Warnings/Triggers: None
Prompt: Tom - motorcycle, rain, oil
Description: It's the end of the dry spell in California...
Author's note: Unbetaed, no grammar check done, so I apologize if there are any mistakes. I did, however, stick with 100 words, yay ( Read more... )

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maiwen05 March 15 2014, 02:14:16 UTC
Aw. :( You captured a beautiful and sad moment so very well.

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ext_2485550 March 15 2014, 14:01:45 UTC
Thank you. I had to give a try, it was tempting me like a new unheard TH album on a music store shelf ;)

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hexenhasel March 15 2014, 07:25:41 UTC
tires grab the road like the paws of a metallic beast.

I really liked this simile. A very bittersweet drabble.

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ext_2485550 March 15 2014, 14:01:57 UTC
Thank you. :)

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kseenaa March 15 2014, 11:04:43 UTC
Now that... was beautiful. :-) What a lovely, LOVELY drabble! Thank you so much for joining. A grand opening to this here fest. I loved it. Reminds me a bit of Sons of Anarchy as well, so you hit two fandoms of mine at once. :-) Grand work!

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ext_2485550 March 15 2014, 14:03:02 UTC
Thank you so much. It was an instant hit and I couldn't leave it unwritten, because the prompt was literally pulling me in so much. And IO plan on giving couple of other prompts a shot as well. :)

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kseenaa March 21 2014, 23:18:19 UTC
I'll look forward to see what you'll come up with then. :-)

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ext_2485550 March 23 2014, 20:14:44 UTC
Real life tries to distract me from writing, but it'll come. Promise. :)

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steinsgrrl March 15 2014, 18:50:56 UTC
Well done! Much more than I expected from the prompt.

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ext_2485550 March 16 2014, 13:11:29 UTC
Thank you :)

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