[fanfic] Lush - Aoi/Uruha - oneshot

[tokyorockstar]

Title: Lush
Chapter: one-shot
Author: tokyorockstar
Pairing: Aoi/Uruha
Genre: Romance, Smut (suggested)
Rating: R
Summary: A rare night out together at a posh club, where alcohol fans the fire.
Warnings: Implied sex
Disclaimer: I don’t own them.
Notes: Yes, Uruha randomly quotes Aoi's infamous musiQ vol.13 interview, LOL.

Comments

[kysume]

This was amazing! *___*
It doesn't always have to be detailed smut this was beautiful!
I really liked how you described both their feelings and I love the last lines so much it nearly made me cry! Thanks so much for sharing this!

[tokyorockstar]

aw thankyouu! :D
i'm glad you liked the way i wrote hehe XD i do prefer writing descriptions of feelings rather than...uh, sexual depictions lmao.
you're welcome <3

[xxshamisen]

I was thinking how bittersweet this piece is, but when I got to the last paragraph, that wasn't the case anymore. This was written beautifully. Thank you very much for this one. ♥

[tokyorockstar]

aww thank you very much, i'm glad you enjoyed it ♥

[twilightmoon777]

I like how the smut wasn't detailed. It made it seem more loving and emotional. It aloud the reader to imagine themselves the way in which Uruha and Aoi spent their time together on that bed. The club scene was really interesting too. I liked how you depicted Aoi as the darkness and Uruha as the light. I kind of see the two this way too because they are so seemly different from one another. The funny thing about this fic is I can actually see this happening in real life. This was one of the best oneshots I've read in a long time. I'm going to keep my eye out for more of your work. Adding this one to my memories. =]

“So 'I’m not gay or anything', huh?” Uruha suddenly said, his voice laced with mockery.

LMFAO - CLASSIC!

[tokyorockstar]

aww i'm glad you enjoyed it ♥
yep i do enjoy writing descriptions of emotions over blatant sexual depictions XD;;
i'm so glad you saw the potential of this happening in real life! i do enjoy portraying them somewhat realistically :D thanks so much for reading & commenting, it means alot to me!

[tokyorockstar]

aww thank you very much, i'm glad you enjoyed it ♥
your comments mean alot to me :D

[minishimi]

Whoa.

Aweshome...>,<

And hot.

Sorry for the short review...I'm trying to finish my homework *shot*

=^.^=

[tokyorockstar]

hehe no prob, i'm glad you enjoyed it!