Read it again, and I really appreciate how unpredictable your plotting is, and how you manage to weave backstory in very naturally. Each of the characters feels real, even such a minor one as the woman signing Rissa into camp. I am dying to know what happens next...I hate reading WIP and usually don't read them until the whole thing is posted, but I couldn't wait to start something in this verse!
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I had to stop at work and read this immediately, just so you know :)
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Something Hannah can use to make Sam's life exciting and/or miserable, I'm sure.
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