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[tolarian]

Okay, my favourite people - obviously I can't be trusted to write essays all by my lonesome. So, here for your perusal and approval, is an essay I'll be handing in early Friday morning, worh 20% of my final mark in Political Science - the subject I might still be majoring in. A discussion of prime ministerial government, full of logic and bluster

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[hanba_na_yume]

I love this essay (it didn't make me fall asleep like I thought it would ;). the only thing that REALLY bothered me, and must be changed is:

more a result of intrinsic ability to make use of the opportunities presented to him by the Constitution and current customs than any evolution away from "Cabinet" government, a Prime Minister's influence in government remains the pre-eminent one: above Cabinet, above the House of Commons, above the influence of any other body operating in the Canadian political system.

This sentence is hard to follow and seems backwards for some reason. Besides being too long, it just doesn't make sense (at least to me). Iwould change it, and perhaps cut it down. Just say what you want to say.

BTW I love your last paragraph :) Love Amanda

[hanba_na_yume]

Whoops, forgot to finish the italics. Forgive me, it is 1:30 am :D And I am talking to Claire about Chris, so my mind really isn't in the right place.

[tolarian]

Thank-you, very much. Luck with Chris, by the way.