It's meeting the man of my dreams..And then meeting his beautiful wife.

[toldbyher]

As i felt my skin soak up the suns rays i tried to tune out everyone having a good time. Im not sure what it was that stopped me from fully enjoying myself. Maybe it was the fact i was still alone. Or maybe i was just simply lazy. Whatever it was it stopped me from having what they called a good time

Comments

[blissfulromance]

wow that was good. really and im not just saying that..cause i just dont say things.
its really good.
what happened next?

[toldbyher]

i dont know.. i guessthats chapter 2. lol. she cant run out of the room and cry cuz that would be too predictable. she is strong on the outside so shell like bitch slap her. nah. she still wants his affection after all that so maybe chap/2 will start that night when shes laying in her bed thinking.(opions.)

[itchiebutt23]

opions would work. from here, you could just have her say "well, nice to meet you but i have to get going" and then what she si really thinking inside. and then when she gets home.

[toldbyher]

i like i like.. then maybe he will be like katie wait and starts to go after her but his g/f pulls him away and he goes willingly back to her.

then maybe i can do that night at dinner and have like all there friends and her and him and the g/f and have everyone talking but they dont know what happened betweenm them.. hmm.. so many possiblilities.

[friendship_sox]

yeah, that was really good
i dont like that guy hes an asshole
i wanna know what happens next too!
your a really good writer dani says, and i agree!

[itchiebutt23]

oh man.

i didnt want to stop reading that, it was so good.
wow.

[heavensent3]

yea i didn;t want to stop reading that either. i cant wait for chapter 2!! lol