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[tomato_dance]

Oh fuck hey guys I wrote a fic.

Series: RPS
Title: Mangoes
Pairing: Jared Padalecki/Jensen Ackles
Rating: 18+/NC-17
Word Count: 3.947
Summary: Jensen starts a joke that involves leaving sticky messes of fruit residue where it will bother Jared most. Only neither of them are really laughing.

Comments

[feathertofly]

I will never look at fruit the same again. From now on whenever I go to the grocery store, I will be wondering what fruit Jensen Ackles is using to torture/tease Jared.

I approve of this.

No seriously, this fic was awesome. I loved it. ♥

[tomato_dance]

I am glad I have altered fruit for you forever. Haha. That makes me really happy. <33 Thank you for your words!

[slightlysatanic]

Um.

Wow.

Talk about a slow burn. Jesus.

This was just PRETTY. Everything was moving too slow at the beginning and then all of a sudden it sped up and careened out of control and somehow you managed to pace all of that perfectly- I could feel in my gut when that tipping point came that pushed them over the edge.

Geez. I'll be in my bunk.

[tomato_dance]

Ohmigosh I'm glad the pacing worked. Half in my mind I was thinking people are gonna wonder wtf is wrong with my pacing. Thank you so, so much!!!

[spooky2_alex]

I don't like fruit very much, but after this, I would look at my fridge with others eyes. And a juicy Jensen? Mmmmmmmmm... This was GREAT, really. Can I beg you for another one? I really would know how their "day after" would be :-)

[tomato_dance]

Oh my god I don't like fruit either I had to do RESEARCH for fruit to find out what ones you could eat plain and which ones would juice enough. Haha.

I'm not sure if I am going to do another one yet, but I hope I get the inspiration! I'm sure I will. :)

[samazon13]

Wow. Delicious and sweet and juicy. Great pacing, great build up. Hot hot hot!
Thank you!
-Samazon

[tomato_dance]

asdfasdjf No, thank YOU! I'm really glad the build up was there. :)

[metaallu]

If you eat mango skin you get something poison ivy on the inside of your mouth. That kind of..... distracted me for the rest of the fic xD;;;;

OTHERWISE THIS WAS EPIC SHIT <3

[tomato_dance]

I actually did research on it and it depends on the ripeness of the fruit and how sensitive people are. :) I was a dork and since I don't know a lot about fruit I wanted to make sure it was okay. So yeah you can have issues but not 100%.

THank you. :)