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The Light Yagami Case

Aug 25, 2010 14:43

Title: The Light Yagami Case
Fandom: Death Note
Characters: Light Yagami, L Lawliet, with mention of Kiyomi Takada, Soichiro Yagami and Naomi Misora.
Word Count: 415
Rating: General
Summary: Strange stream of consciousness thing in which L's conscience reflects on the aftermath of Light's death and seems to take on a new investigation... post mortem.
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who:l lawliet, who:light yagami, fandom:death note, dedication:lise

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so we're going to ignore the irony of this account sayitwith_ice August 28 2010, 05:40:35 UTC

I love your L voice, I really do, so you need to stop being insecure about it now.

You have all my pseudo-canon in here! How did you know! Like the bit about the scream in the helicopter and that being sort of the equivalent of mind rape, and also the bit about Light always standing out even when it's in the worst way, and this whole picture makes me all melancholy in the best ways.

Because picturing L standing over dying!broken!Light and thinking all of this is just...hurty pretty good.

Favorite bit: "I know you. That was what his eyes said, but with the dark bags and his perpetual lack of expression, the message was certainly getting lost."

You say so much with so little; it's really a gift of yours.

Re: so we're going to ignore the irony of this account tomboy_typist August 28 2010, 15:04:17 UTC

FDLKJFLKDJFblush. I'm glad you liked it - and you know (just so you know) - all your pseudo-canon actually is listed on the DN TVTropes page. >.> But yes, I saw this too, actually.

And thaaank you. I guess the creative writing seminar paid off after all - that was one of my instructor's leitmotiv. Less is more.