Comments | tommyhanson: Fic: Backup

tommyhanson

Fic: Backup

Oct 09, 2010 01:32

A/N: Okay, so, this is officially my first foray into writing for the White Collar fandom. I absolutely ADORED the finale (so long as it has the appropriate outcome where the lovely Moz is concerned), and I felt I had to write something. However, be warned, this fic is not so good. I’d say mediocre at best, but I figured I’d post it anyway (because ( Read more... )

fanfic, elizabeth burke, peter burke, white collar, neal caffrey, backup

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deej1957 October 9 2010, 07:14:50 UTC

Um, this was pure poetry. I really have no words, it was beautiful and painful and loving and... I guess I did have some words after all *G*

May this be the first of many White Collar fics, the LONGER the better.

Seriously, you caught Peter and Elle perfectly. I like that Neal finally broke-- we so rarely see him anything other than sauve and "con-ish" on the show.

tommyhanson October 10 2010, 02:24:03 UTC

Thank you very much for that review. I'm working on more WC fics, but longer... eh, not so much. How 'bout a lot of short ones instead? ;) I love it when Neal finally loses control on the show, because those are the only times when you can tell that he's not conning the world, and see the real Neal.

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tommyhanson October 10 2010, 02:28:15 UTC

Thank you! Glad you liked it!

elainasaunt October 9 2010, 09:05:14 UTC

You're definitely too hard on yourself. This is a really creditable first effort. (I notice you say first in this fandom - have you written for others?) I'm not that crazy for woobie!Neal, but that's purely a matter of personal taste, and it's the only negative criticism I can come up with.

I love the badhair!Neal in your icon.

tommyhanson October 10 2010, 02:35:56 UTC

Yeah, I've written a bit of Leverage fic before, (and one really cracktastic 21 Jump Street one after a great deal of sleep deprivation.) And lol, I couldn't resist making the "badhair" icon, he was just too adorable as college!Bryce. And Thanks so much for your comment. :)

That was lovely. ursula4x October 9 2010, 10:23:06 UTC

It spoke emotionally truths well. Peter was so well in character and El was as she is, wonderful.

Re: That was lovely. tommyhanson October 10 2010, 02:36:50 UTC

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it.

midgetnazgul October 9 2010, 15:14:14 UTC

And death was definitely outside of his two miles.

Best line of the fic. Excellent job. <3

ssw_loved October 9 2010, 22:42:01 UTC

Odd question, but who's in your icon?

midgetnazgul October 9 2010, 23:57:56 UTC

It's ok, I don't mind! It's Matthew Gray Gubler from Criminal Minds - he did a few You Tube short films, and that is part of one.

sinkwriter October 10 2010, 01:30:09 UTC

Is that right before he broke his knee? Poor Matthew.

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