Fic: Mosaic 2/? - Cake

[tommyhanson]

Cake

The first time Neal stole something, he was five years old.

Peter’s asked him before, not really expecting an answer, how he ended up where he is. A forger. A con artist. A thief.

A criminal.

Neal thinks about telling him, sometimes. Imagines what he’d look like if he did tell him. Wonders what Peter would think of him if he told him the truth.

If

Comments

[kriadydragon]

Oh! *Wibbles* That's so sad! I just want to hug Neal. Better yet, have Peter find out, then he tells El, then El forces Peter to hug Neal :D

[ssw_loved]

This is beautiful. It's perfectly written and a very believable back story. It's very true to Neal, both how he didn't tell Peter and how Peter wasn't expecting an answer.

Loved this. :)

[sinkwriter]

Oh my gosh, I ache for that poor little boy. I just want to gather him up and take him home and protect him. That's what the tone of this piece did to my heart.

:'(

Nicely done. :)

[sahiya]

*sniffle* Oh man, tell me you're going to bring the comfort at some point with these. You are, aren't you? AREN'T YOU?

[trystings]

Omg, heartbreaking!