please critique

Jul 30, 2010 12:21

I have been looking at this thing for so long and i hate it. I am ready to scrap the whole thing, but maybe together we can save it. Please tell me what needs help.


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timollie5502 July 30 2010, 16:44:31 UTC
i like the one in the top corner that's looking at us - maybe add another like him?
honestly, i actually really like it :)

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mandy_moon July 30 2010, 20:31:15 UTC
Yeah, I like it too, but I understand that that's no help if the painting isn't doing it for you. The only thing I can think of is maybe a sharper contrast between the fishes and the water, maybe?

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