Commentfic-A-Palooza Part Two: Electric Boogaloo

[chibirhm]

OH MY GOD I'M POSTING Y'ALL.

After Big Bang I have been having what I can only describe as a crisis of creativity. The end of Big Bang was brutal for me, between Google Doc implosions and forcing myself to write when I was just out of any juice whatsoever and then extending the deadline and working through my vacation... I just killed my brain.

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[cloaked_lace]

All three comment fics were full of delight and squee.

arf arf arf.

[bachlava]

"Some of us can't, oh, roll out of a moving vehicle onto asphalt without sustaining a few bumps and bruises."
Such is the plight of mere mortals! But you've made it worth the payoff for Danny. Liked this very much.

[finduilas_clln]

OMG how much fun is it to stumble into a new fandom and find that YOU have written fic in it! ♥ a million times!!

And now I can't go four days without waiting by my phone like a high school girl hoping you'll call and ask me to go make an afternoon of pissing all over someone's constitutional rights."
Best. Line. Ever.

"Are you... you've got to be fucking kidding me, McGarrett, is there anything I don't talk about?
Totally second best line!

"Please," Steve asks quietly. He tentatively reaches up and presses his fingers against where Danny had been rubbing, and Danny hisses in a sharp intake of breath. "I just want to take care of you."
Oooh. So much love.

ARGH. I loved these three fics so much! Amazing.

[teddibear]

I loved all three of these. But the last one with Steve and his FEELINGS, omg. I just melted when he said he wanted to take care of Danny. Awww. You capture their voices and their personalities so well. Lovely little set of three ficlets.