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Mar 29, 2007 20:03
Yuk, I really don't like the way the situation with the captured UK servicemen in Iran is going.
Another letter has been released, supposedly from Seaman F. Turney, which says that
"I am writing to inform you of my situation (
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musical_lottie
March 30 2007, 16:31:37 UTC
Even through our wrongdoing, they have still treated us well and humanely [...]
That doesn't make sense - 'through our wrongdoing they have ... ' er, no. That's a mistake and a native English speaker would not have said that.
I ask the representatives of the House of Commons after the government had promised that this type of incident would not happen again.
Why have they let this occur and why has the government not been questioned over this?
Again the structure of that is wrong - the question is supposed to be in the same sentence as 'I ask ... '
And I agree with the point regarding the use of 'compassionate.'
Clearly a dictated letter / statement, in my opinion.
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das_prompt
April 2 2007, 20:04:36 UTC
Hey, catch me online if you have a second.
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das_prompt
April 6 2007, 02:18:55 UTC
Hey! I got your message the other day, and was just wondering if that was still happening. If you can't, I dig, just need to know how to plan.
:D :D :D
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That doesn't make sense - 'through our wrongdoing they have ... ' er, no. That's a mistake and a native English speaker would not have said that.
I ask the representatives of the House of Commons after the government had promised that this type of incident would not happen again.
Why have they let this occur and why has the government not been questioned over this?
Again the structure of that is wrong - the question is supposed to be in the same sentence as 'I ask ... '
And I agree with the point regarding the use of 'compassionate.'
Clearly a dictated letter / statement, in my opinion.
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:D :D :D
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