LJ Idol Season 10 - Week 14: Campfire Stories

[tonithegreat]

Aaron Gilbert braced for the blast of warm air as he let himself out of the big old office building, and was surprised when he strode out into relatively cool sunshine. The sun coming through his boss's window had looked like it was cruelly baking, but maybe that was only the mood he was in

Comments

[i_17bingo]

That's the end? When you had me glued to my screen in total suspense, you just leave us not knowing his fate?

Damn you.

[rayaso]

A great ending -- not what I expected to be hidden in the truck! It's one thing to kidnap an innocuous public employee, another thing entirely to kidnap a possible serial killer, or at least a competent hunter. I like the choices you left us with. Good job!

[halfshellvenus]

I do like it when the 'victim' turns out to be far more dangerous than his captors!

I fear there will be no justice in whatever is boiling in the background-- just a fight for immediate survival. :O

[shadowwolf13]

I really want to read more, I like. :)