LJ Idol Season 11 - Week 3: Everything looks like a nail

[tonithegreat]

Aaron Grimes walked back into his office. Halfway to his desk he turned back to the door and pulled it closed tightly behind him. He needed a minute. He sighed, hand still on the handle and turned in place. He leaned back on the closed door. He was so tired

Comments

[bleodswean]

You did such a great job setting this up! You pulled me in right away and I had no problem feeling Aaron's pain and predicament.

[tonithegreat]

Yay, I am glad this worked in that way!

[az_starshine]

Oh, this is brilliant. I really liked how you set this up and how relatable Aaron was. Good job.

[tonithegreat]

Thank you kindly!

[karmasoup]

Sometimes it's the simplest approaches that come across best. Especially when the fish stinks from the head down.

[static_abyss]

Great characterization. This was a really smooth read and kind of felt like a setup for a longer story. Well done!

[encrefloue]

Path of least resistance (to dumpster fires)! The strain of Aaron's environment is so palpable. Really well developed. I'm glad he's found the solace of breath! And yes...maybe meme work makes the dream work 😆