LJ Idol Season 11 - Week 5: I know my enemies. I used to call them friends. . .

Nov 04, 2019 18:28

Eran sighed as he slotted himself into the meditation dock. Each time he reported here the experience started with a frisson of fear. As the hardware molded itself to his body, there was always a moment just before the capsule sealed when he worried that this time the fit was going to be off and he wouldn’t be able to relax and drift and come ( Read more... )

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static_abyss November 5 2019, 04:18:44 UTC
I love science fiction and I love these kinds of time travel loops. I am 100% hooked and would definitely read this entire story.

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sweeny_todd November 6 2019, 12:20:42 UTC
I got a bad feeling from that voice in the first part!

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bleodswean November 6 2019, 20:06:25 UTC
What a great ending! You write sci-fi with such a modern and relatable angle. Really enjoyable to read!

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rayaso November 6 2019, 23:42:23 UTC
I loved the ending! You write science fiction very well.

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roina_arwen November 7 2019, 02:27:05 UTC
Ooh! Great set up - I hope there’s going to be more to this story!

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