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Fractured, Part 4

Dec 05, 2011 02:37

Title: Fractured
Author: tonjavmoore
Artist: cjharknessgirl
Genre: Crossover with Dr. Who
Pairing(s): Jack/Ianto
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 20291
Warnings: None

Summary: Season 2, sometime before Reset. While the rest of the team are hunting Weevils, Ianto Jones disappears from the Hub. When the CCTV shows that the Doctor is responsible, what will Jack do?

( Fractured, Part 4 )

ianto_bigbang, janto, crossover

Comments 17

milady_dragon December 5 2011, 16:36:38 UTC

Well, that was just a bit of awesome!

I would feel sorry for Ten, but really, I can't. He really did mess things up in a big way. Trust Eleven to put things right!

Definitely snagging the PDF. Loved it!

tonjavmoore December 14 2011, 02:38:25 UTC

Thank you.

Ten treated Jack like garbage. If you watch the episodes you can see all the coldness in eyes when he looks at him. So this was my chance to be a little rude to him and I enjoyed it very much.

aeron_lanart December 6 2011, 03:25:21 UTC

Good stuff - I've just stayed up well past my bedtime to read the whole thing and it was definitely worth it. Love that it was Eleven who had to sort out Ten's mess - I never did like the way Ten treated Jack.

tonjavmoore December 14 2011, 02:40:02 UTC

Hope you weren't too sleepy in the morning! So glad you liked it. I think Eleven is a better person than Ten. So I wrote it that way.

diggybear December 6 2011, 04:27:01 UTC

Oh I liked this much. Ten did muck up a bit and I'm glad Eleven fixed it.

tonjavmoore December 14 2011, 02:42:21 UTC

They could make two seasons of Eleven going around to fixing Ten's messes. Ten committed genocide, for crying out loud! So here was my chance to give it a go.

cjharknessgirl December 6 2011, 06:48:25 UTC

I'm glad that Eleven fixed the mess that Ten made.

Jack and Ianto's kids are too adorable for words.

This was an amazing story! I love that their children will become Guardians. Have I told you how much I loved this?

cjharknessgirl December 6 2011, 06:49:02 UTC

Oh and I'm snagging the PDF. :D

tonjavmoore December 14 2011, 02:43:56 UTC

Thank you. Couldn't have done it without you.

I think Ianto and the Doctor are right to be concerned about adorability constraints.

lorib12 December 12 2011, 17:34:27 UTC

Lovely fic and it makes me happy beyond belief that Ianto is immortal with Jack :-) The idea of a bunch of little Jack and Ianto's running around the universe makes me smile!!!

tonjavmoore December 14 2011, 02:45:02 UTC

Thank you.

I can't imagine Jack and Ianto not having adorable kids. Seriously, look at them!