What a great chapter. From the awkward conversation with Natalie & Sage to the attempted reconciliation with Lily you hit all the right notes. Teen age Luke & Reid are adorable. I like how Luke saying he loves Reid mirrors what happened on the show--he told it to someone else first & Reid feels uncomfortable in saying it back at that moment. Now when Reid finally does say it, I don't want to see any trains around.
Thank you so much! ^^, I'm glad you're enjoying it! You want to hear something funny? I did not plan on that to happen; that it would mirror how it happened on the show! I wrote it, and then when I was working on that last part where Reid says he heard what Luke said, and I felt like he was acting too much like Noah (with not being able to say it back). So I wrote that he didn't want to say it right then instead, and then I noticed how similar it was to the show! xD dear lord, I am channeling TPTB xD Oh no, there are no trains in my world! No trains, no selfish pediatricians, no need to go anywhere to get any heart. ;)
I'm sorry, that was long x) Thank you so much for your comment ^^,
Great chapter!! Lucinda makes me laugh! Oh Luke worried about lily being upset. Yay for telling her off! Stand up for your "boyfriend"!! All the talk about boyfriends (Luke being a girlfriend! LOL) and boys kissing boys - awesome! oh that ending :)
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Thank you for not making us wait too long for more!
GREAT chapter.
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Haha, yeah, sometimes that pesky real life comes in the way of being able to write. ;P
Thank you so much ^^,
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You want to hear something funny? I did not plan on that to happen; that it would mirror how it happened on the show! I wrote it, and then when I was working on that last part where Reid says he heard what Luke said, and I felt like he was acting too much like Noah (with not being able to say it back). So I wrote that he didn't want to say it right then instead, and then I noticed how similar it was to the show! xD dear lord, I am channeling TPTB xD
Oh no, there are no trains in my world! No trains, no selfish pediatricians, no need to go anywhere to get any heart. ;)
I'm sorry, that was long x) Thank you so much for your comment ^^,
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<3!!
Awwww, this chapter was...amazing *sighs happily*
WHAT IS THIS WARM FUZZY FEELING I'M FEELING? <3
loved it, sweetie<3 you be a genius, yes.<3
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I'm glad you liked it, bby! <3
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Lucinda makes me laugh!
Oh Luke worried about lily being upset. Yay for telling her off! Stand up for your "boyfriend"!!
All the talk about boyfriends (Luke being a girlfriend! LOL) and boys kissing boys - awesome!
oh that ending :)
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