green eyes alternate endings

[tonksandremus]

Author’s Note: It was SO hard not to use this ending. But I knew which one was most fitting and which one was most realistic, however I must say I do like my writing best in this one. For all you Pro-Human fans, this if for you.

Edward’s POV.

“The hospital needed Carlisle for a few hours. He’s really sorry.” Esme’s face was apologetic as she

Comments

[sprut6]

I liked all of them a lot and it is hard to choose a favorite. I'm really glad that you shared the alternate endings with us!

[ibelonginnarnia]

Whatever you did, it was something amazing. No fic has ever made me cry but that completely brought me to tears! It was beautiful! I'm still happy with the final ending that you chose, but, nonetheless!

[sleepneeded911]

I just reviewed your story over at fanfiction, BUT I thought, what the hell, mind as well do so on LJ. Hehehe. Anyways, I gotta say that I would have totally loved to see the first alternate ending as the one you chose since it's more happier obviously BUT the one you chose completely made since it makes sense with their characters and the book. Though I do have to say I loved the Epilogue where the Cullens came back to Forks and saw their grandchildren and Emmett wanted to tranform them so they could replace E&B. Hehehe

[lpdestiny]

Oh my god! I loved all the endings!! But I have to say, but favorite was the human ending. That was so well written, as all of them were, but there was something magical about it! The 2nd alternate ending on this page made me tear up!! That was so sad.

You're an ahmazing writer! For your first twilight fanfic..WOW! PLEASEEE write more!
This was one of my favorite twilight fanfics!
Congrats on writing such a beautiful BE story!

[carouselcity]

The second ending was so heartbreaking. Although i'm totally team Vampire, there's still a part of me that hopes something like this could happen. ♥