I came up with a new Slam term!!!

Sep 10, 2008 18:24

You know when a poet changes a couple words or phrases in an old poem to update it and then reads it again?  We should say:

"You can put lipstick on an old poem, but it is still an old poem!"

Uh huh, uh huh, sounds stupid now, but you'll be using it!

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bajatierra September 10 2008, 23:36:22 UTC
You must immediately apologize to Big Poppa E.

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Note to a few other poets, including me in 3 years. johnnylexicon September 10 2008, 23:43:11 UTC
You can wrap an old poem in a piece of paper and call it a "signature piece." But it's still going to stink 8 years later.

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ragan September 11 2008, 00:20:26 UTC
u r a sexist black man

j/k
;-)

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Here's to selectively self-centered dyslexia! tonyjackson September 11 2008, 00:36:13 UTC
You know, I first read that as "u r a sexiest black man!" And, I was like, "Thanks, Ragan!"

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when a poet overperforms a poorly written poem martyoutloud September 11 2008, 17:51:08 UTC
I'm fond of saying

"you can put syrup on shit, but that don't make it pancakes."

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