i think i liked the second use of tenacity better than the first. this has the feel to a song, i could almost hear it being sung. is that an intended factor?
this actually really reminds me of that part in lateralus:
With my feet upon the ground I move myeslf between the sounds and open wide to suck it in. I feel it move across my skin.... and so on.
yeah I was really pissed off at this certain person that is restraining me from living my life and focusing on what's important to me
actually I didn't intend it to be sung, I just wrote it during a boring assembly at school because I was so pissed off and I guess my creativity was flowing
yeah, i made the comm so i try to reply to every post when i can. plus im involved in a few different critique communities, check out the_second_step if you feel so inclined. lots of good feedback from there.
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this actually really reminds me of that part in lateralus:
With my feet upon the ground I move myeslf between the sounds and open wide to suck it in. I feel it move across my skin.... and so on.
ok time for sleep.
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yeah I was really pissed off at this certain person that is restraining me from living my life and focusing on what's important to me
actually I didn't intend it to be sung, I just wrote it during a boring assembly at school because I was so pissed off and I guess my creativity was flowing
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