Endless

[tootie_sullivan]

Title: Endless.
Genre: Angst/Romance.
Pairing: Alfred x Arthur.
Type: One-shot.
Rating: T. 
Summary: It was as if it were yesterday.
Warning:  Character death. Angst. Alternate Universe. Mild amount of OOC.

Comments

[kasumicc]

That was pretty sweet :) You took such a hopeful look to death, and their scene together was lovely to read. And grammar-wise, it looks well enough to me. I'd say this first try is a good one :)

[tootie_sullivan]

Thank you :D. I look at death another way sometimes. The scene was honestly what I was worried about the most.... Awesome :D.

Again, thanks :D

[xolavander]

You want an honest opinion? Alright.

This is very precious. Really. I imagine that after Arthur died, Alfred had never really grinned in that same, heart-warming smile of his since then. And then, you writing this brilliant fiction of how the boys reunited again in (..uh, I don't really know the term for that, but I'll say) a void in between heaven and.. something. It's beautiful. I think you're doing a very great job as well.

Ah well, that's a lot, is it not?
But it clearly states my honest opinions. (:

[tootie_sullivan]

Wow... thank you. I am honestly blushing right now.
I am really just stunned right now. This might be the nicest review I've ever gotten.
I am glad that you thought so. I almost didn't post this here because of nerves. (I don't know the word for it either... I suppose 'nothingness' might work...)

It's a good amount I think :D.
True, haha :D

[pandawolf]

I love your idea of the afterlife here. It's beautiful and filled with hope ^^

Good job!

[tootie_sullivan]

Thanks :D!
I am so glad that you think so :3