KMDeanon[By The Bay] chapter 1

[tophatviolet]

Title: By The Bay
Genre: Romance, Drama
Pairing(s): eventual UKUS
Rating/Warnings: T for dirty shoes?
Summary: Deanon from KM, Restaurant AU Alfred takes a job in a high class Restaurant to pay for his schooling and winds up ever curious about the stuffy British Manager there.
Notes: I decided to go through a bunch of stuff I've done for the KM or

Comments

[lovelycudy]

I loved this in the meme and I'm glad you are de-anoning.

Great job!

[tophatviolet]

Holy Cheeseburger your fast XD
and thank you so much! I really want to finish it and I needed to reread it anyways so I thought I'd might as well post it as I go.

[tophatviolet]

Why, thank you~

[juliet_ros]

Great start~
This reminds me of my first day as a barista. gah x_x

Before I go, you might want to review this sentence:
"He toke a long sigh and looked calmer now."

[tophatviolet]

Thank you
and oh my, that does sound quite 'gah'

Changed it a bit. Hope it's suitable now. Thanks for pointing it out.

[juliet_ros]

I meant toke ought to be took...

You're welcome and oh it was. :)

[tophatviolet]

oAo I thought the wording sounded weird so I changed that but thank you again. That seems to be one of my weaknesses with the toke/took. OTL Once again, thanks.

[iggyxalfie]

hahaha I can totally see this happening

[ren_chan146]

Pretty nice story.
Poor Alfie, it must be hard to have Arthur for a boss even though he has quite a nice ass.^^
But I'm sure he'll get used to it.
Can't wait to read more.