[fic] 君は僕の命に色を上げる陽光。you are the sunshine that brings color into my life

Jul 02, 2012 23:07

∞ 君は僕の命に色を上げる陽光。you are the sunshine that brings color into my life
→ EXO: Suho/Kris; Fluff, PG-13, 630 words
! no beta, made this in a rush, please don't hesitate to point out my errors ; ;

Yifan tightens his embrace on Junmyeon, and the latter finds himself back to reality. )

fic: krisuho, fandom: exo, fic: drabble

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torakiss July 15 2012, 04:17:08 UTC
thank you so much for commenting on this! i was thinking that nobody (except for a few twitter friends who have no lj accounts liked this ; ;)

and i hope you imagined his sexy husky sleepy voice because it's such a wonderful thing in the world ; ;

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blubtrflynflats July 15 2012, 06:10:00 UTC
aljfhsfjhsdjfh

Excuse me while I shoo away these /thoughts/ out of my head.

When Junmyeon is with Yifan he sees clearly, he's calm, and omg "his reality with Yifan"

Can I just.. be part of that reality too? HAHAHA

/bye bye

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torakiss July 15 2012, 10:21:26 UTC
heeeeeeeeeee thank you so much for reading this unnie! :D and lol now i'm starting to think that you have this cute elephant crush on yifan keke ♥

let's go be a part of that reality then! *grabs your hand and runs*

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dee_fml July 15 2012, 09:30:59 UTC
I'm awed at how you used colors to tell the story and to gradually show the readers how Junmyeon felt. For me, it somewhat resembles synaesthesia and I really like it. And his reality with Yifan...*sobs at the perfection*

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torakiss July 15 2012, 10:26:12 UTC
thank you for reading! i'm glad you like it! :D (i had to look up "synaesthesia" in the dictionary ;w; i never knew about such a thing until you pointed it out, and for that i learned something new and i thank you ☺) \(^w^ \ )

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blake_maclaren July 16 2012, 17:37:38 UTC
first ever suris fic dongsaeng, and you didn't disappoint. ToT can't get my mind off of sleepy wu yifan. and hope that tinge of pink on junmyeon reaches his neck, u know, the spot where kris tickled him. coz i can totally have the hots for junmyeon's blushing neck. OTL

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torakiss July 17 2012, 12:44:12 UTC
i'm glad i didn't disappoint you unnie! ;ww;

a "blushing neck"!!!! i haven't thought of that! but now that you've mentioned it, just imagining junmyeon with a blushing neck is making me sdhfklasdfjakdsfj right now! *ww*

thank you so much for reading this, unnie! ♥

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suheafoams December 15 2012, 19:52:13 UTC
omfg this was so nice to read I can't
your writing style is awesome too! C:

sobs you give me feels for suho/kris all over again

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torakiss December 16 2012, 12:27:15 UTC
oh dear, thank you so much for reading and commenting!! only a few people can understand my writing style, and I am glad that you like it! ;w;

yes, KrisHo is a vitamin, it's healthy for the heart!! ♥ (^∀^)ノ

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