Flying

[torananashi]

Eleven reasons why things happened the way they did
Fandom: Jrock-Alice Nine
Character/s or Pairing: Tora/Nao
Prompt: 60. fall/fly
Title:  Flying 
Rating: PG (?)
Warnings Angst, Boy/Boy
Disclaimers:I don't own these guys nor do anything that is mentioned is a real life event etc.

Comments

[xcoffee_smilex]

it's short...But real sad.

I envy you.
With so little words, you managed to convey a lot of feelings.

GOOD JOB.
*sniffs*

[torananashi]

Thank you so much~~

I find I have a problem writing longer stuff, so I just stick to the short >.>

[vampiremilly]

very nice. oh but made me a tad sad~ but that's ok it was a very good read ^w^

[torananashi]

Thank you :)

Don't be sad~

[torananashi]

Um, yeah, it's supposed to be part of a series of 11 which are the "eleven reasons things...." So hopefully, by the end of it it would make a bit more sense?

Thankyou! I do hope I'll be able to write more in future :P

[watashi_wa_13]

I thought this was really lovely <3

There really is very little written with Nao in it, let alone from his perspective, so cheers to you for writing this bit. ^_^

Also, I like how you've included things about... well, sort of what it means to be Nao, which is to be band leader and sort of be leading from behind, specifically from behind a drumset. He often gives he image that he flies in his sort of Nao-ish euphoric state all the time, and it's hard to believe even Nao doesn't fall sometimes.

You've done a nice job of capturing the spirit of a drabble, and confining a lot of emotion and personality into exactly 150 words. I hope school doesn't keep you from letting us hear more from you, because you seem like a talented writer. :) Thanks for posting.

Wow, I didn't mention Tora being in it at all. lol. Well, I can say that Tora in this reminds me of my ex, if you go back a little in time. Tora gives all of the same impressions of being in love, and then something inexplicable changes.

[torananashi]

Thank you for reading!
I think Nao has always been a favorite of mine and so when I write, I liketo write from him or about him.
Sorry about your ex though, sometimes I don't know what happened with mine either

[watashi_wa_13]

:)

[erikaoi]

Uh sad.if theres 10 more hope at the end its going to be happy ending?

[torananashi]

Well I've written four so seven more to go?
And it may be a happy ending but I highly doubt it >.>