I'm not an artist at all and I don't know much about it, but your art looks great! ^-^ I really like the way you color your pics.
By the way, about your English, it's quite good. What matters the most is that you can make yourself understood! ^^ But since you asked me to point out any mistakes, here are some small corrections:
"I am very tense... because I am not used to writing in English."
The sentence "Their words set my mind at rest a little" sounds a little strange to me... Maybe I'd rephrase it as, "Their words put me at ease."
"Sunday" and "Monday" should always start with a capital letter.
Re: Hello!tori_1231September 24 2012, 17:40:54 UTC
Your impression for my painting made me happy! I am glad!^o^ And thank you for your point out my mistakes! Your explanation was very easy to understand. I learnd much from you! Thank you so much!
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By the way, about your English, it's quite good. What matters the most is that you can make yourself understood! ^^ But since you asked me to point out any mistakes, here are some small corrections:
"I am very tense... because I am not used to writing in English."
The sentence "Their words set my mind at rest a little" sounds a little strange to me... Maybe I'd rephrase it as, "Their words put me at ease."
"Sunday" and "Monday" should always start with a capital letter.
"tommorow" > "tomorrow"
"So I will be getting up early"
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And thank you for your point out my mistakes!
Your explanation was very easy to understand. I learnd much from you!
Thank you so much!
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