oh, relief!tori_siikanenNovember 18 2004, 09:01:13 UTC
I'm floundering around a bit here - doing my best to write like Tanith, though I know I'm missing that je ne sais quoi that makes such prosy prose readable. But I am happy with how the story is shaping, even if the sentence level is making me wince a bit.
But bah. I can go back and clean it up once I've done the draft.
And can I say that your muncle fic from the other week was WHOO HOT? just like sizzzzzzzle. not many people handle sex scenes that deftly.
Re: oh, relief!cordwainer_sNovember 18 2004, 17:07:03 UTC
You are kindness itself, dear lady.
It has been a long time since I read Tanith, but your prose matches my memory of hers. The rhythmic tricks are like her. And the sort of strange word choices.
As for sex scenes, I could say I learned from the best.
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But bah. I can go back and clean it up once I've done the draft.
And can I say that your muncle fic from the other week was WHOO HOT? just like sizzzzzzzle. not many people handle sex scenes that deftly.
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It has been a long time since I read Tanith, but your prose matches my memory of hers. The rhythmic tricks are like her. And the sort of strange word choices.
As for sex scenes, I could say I learned from the best.
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