Fun with linebreaks

[torrain]

I am feeling odd tonight

Comments

[ironphoenix]

Some nice bits to that...

[torrain]

Thank you! I think I like the line about line breaks like beads, and the fact that I actually got the weaving-in-of-ends done on a baby jacket before I went to bed. (And the knitting-of-hat, although that thing still needs Kitchener stitching and ends woven in. Finishing, thou art my bane.)

[ironphoenix]

Yes, the image of "beads/ in an enthusiast's first clumsily assembled earrings" was quite vivid!

Good luck with the finishings!

[rachel2205]

I like this! The second stanza particularly actually works as a poem :)

[torrain]

Awh, thanks. :D It was partly a product of feeling a little too frangible to organize a properly written prose post, but I am glad it turned out the way it did. (And that I was right in the third stanza. Yay for a relatively good morning's sleep. >.> )