Comments | torrens_v_casus: A Less Than Composed Toast

torrens_v_casus

A Less Than Composed Toast

Dec 31, 2009 00:19

A Toast

( To you, each and everyone... )

Comments 5

zeitakuknight December 31 2009, 15:20:46 UTC

For some reason, some parts of this make me think of Dante from DMC. I don't know why~

I enjoyed it though. A little on the bitter side of a toast, and some parts really didn't catch me. On whole, It's well written. I like it ^0^

torrens_v_casus January 4 2010, 03:43:02 UTC

Ah you ever play it or just from talking/cut scenes?

Bitter was exactly the flavour I was going for with it. Not every toast can sweet and cheerful. Glad that you enjoyed it.

kawaii_gaara January 15 2010, 10:57:04 UTC

Maaan you placed such a bitter feeling soo... I don't know elegantly? LOL =owo=;;;;;;;;;;; I really like it despite it's bitterness but the message is clear.

torrens_v_casus January 17 2010, 00:57:55 UTC

It was one of those nights for whatever reason I was in a bitter mood, and wanting to write this was the result. I'm glad that you liked it despite the walk on the less than pleasant side of reading.

kawaii_gaara January 17 2010, 11:50:14 UTC

Honestly, you express things in the most eloquent manner and so beautifully too. I really envy and admire that.