Comments | torriee: Four drabbles... =)

torriee

Four drabbles... =)

Oct 10, 2009 16:59

Pairing: AoixUruha
Word count:108

( Creation of beauty )

Comments 9

jalela October 10 2009, 10:39:32 UTC

I loved the feeling of the drabble "Rain". But I just had to say that the second sentence was a bit too long. xD But it was a lovely drabble that made me smile. ^^

torriee October 10 2009, 11:19:40 UTC

thank you for commenting =3.
yes, that's the part that i'm feeling strange too but i couldn't found the exact word to substitute it. -_-; maybe i should delete it that sentence.

kawasakininja October 10 2009, 12:45:50 UTC

These were nice.

He licks his lips suggestively and speaks, “Well do you?”
LOL, I like Reita's attitude here.

Breaking up never been his thing.
Oh, I like this one. Because Ruki is so much drama over a breakup.

torriee October 10 2009, 14:22:19 UTC

yeah, Ruki's a total drama king.
thank you for commenting =3

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torriee October 11 2009, 07:30:02 UTC

fixed.
thank you !! =3

limaccia_san October 10 2009, 23:14:32 UTC

O_O I totally loved the Ruki's drabble.. so inspiring, thank u

torriee October 11 2009, 07:30:37 UTC

thank you for commenting =3

Can't wait to have my say anonymous April 13 2011, 06:15:16 UTC

Hi - I am certainly glad to discover this. cool job!