FIC: My Princess (Buri/Thayet, PG)

[ex_theatrica309]

Title: My Princess
Pairing: Buri/Thayet
Rating: PG
Summary: Jonathan has just proposed to Thayet, and Buri is jealous. Wherever we've gone, we two, whatever has happened to us over the years, she has always been mine.
Author's Notes: I started writing this awhile ago, but got bogged down with finals and ficathon deadlines and whatnot. So, here it

Comments

[riverflame]

wah! this is heartbreaking and lovely.

favorite bits: the griffin pendant, the garnet "lover's token", reading love poetry, your descriptions of how Thayet acts from Buri's point of veiw... wow. I love it.

[ex_theatrica309]

Thank you! I actually wouldn't have thought of the griffin pendant if 'griffin' hadn't been one of the challenge words, and then the rest of it, with the 'lover's token,' came together.

Thank you much again! Glad you liked it. :)

[themis]

*sniffles* This was really good. Very sad, but really good. I have Issues with first person POVs, but I think it worked well in this fic.

Gah, now I feel guilty for being a Jon/Thayet fan...

[ex_theatrica309]

Yeah, I don't often do first-person, but it seemed to work for this one...

Thank you! :D

[uknosila]

Oh! This is beautiful. I loved the idea of the griffin necklace - I think it suits Jon's personality really well. And you can't help but feel for Buri.

[ex_theatrica309]

Thank you! :D

[ronniekinns]

Oh, this is lovely. Thank you so much for writing it. <3

[rhipowered]

Just came across this. Really lovely.

[ex_theatrica309]

Thank you so much! <3