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toryavi

The Hollow, Chapter 9

May 06, 2008 02:05

Title: The Hollow
Author: Toryavi (one half of it)
Pairing: Tora/Miyavi
Rating: PG-13/R
Warnings: Psychological disorders and institutions.
Disclaimer: The people belong to themselves, the story and plot belongs to me.
Summary: Sometimes, everyone needs a little crazy in their life.
Notes: This is the second to last chapter so the next one is ( Read more... )

miyavi. alice nine. the gazette

Comments 13

aniffa May 6 2008, 07:14:40 UTC

Yay! An update. This was so very beautiful and sad at the same time. Im looking forward to more.

toryavi May 6 2008, 20:13:32 UTC

Thank you~ Only one more though, alas.

bauci May 6 2008, 07:23:22 UTC

The mood was so wonderful, I could feel the melancholy sneak inside me. Yet it still was so sweet.
The uncertainness about their future was really palpable. I hope you'll give them a happy ending.

♥

toryavi May 6 2008, 20:14:47 UTC

I was originally going to give them a sad ending, but I couldn't bear to do it. It won't be sad though, so don't worry!

kapike May 6 2008, 12:47:02 UTC

Oh This was so beautiful and so sad! I hope this story has a happy ending! Thanks for the update

toryavi May 6 2008, 20:15:18 UTC

Aww, thank you for reading! It'll be a..not sad ending! Promise that much. ^_^

uchihashamey May 6 2008, 15:34:35 UTC

That chapter was so sad ;__;
But what is more sad is knowing that next will be the last chapter!! ;__; I've never been so addicted to a fanfic before!

toryavi May 6 2008, 20:15:40 UTC

Aw, well, I'll try to make the last chapter a good one ^_^!

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toryavi May 6 2008, 22:11:12 UTC

I feel like the almost vignette-type form really works with that so I'm glad you got those emotions!

I'm not going to lie, seeing the end of this fic's going to make me sad too >_< But it must be done! I refuse to dislike it when fics drag on so I always believe in ending things as soon as possible, even if it breaks my heart a little bit.