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[diamondust]

Another one for the Kratos/Zelos anti-pairing. It's been awhile. Go easy on me.

Title: Unexpected Allies
Prompt #: 56: Allies
Character/Pairings: Huh. Let's see. Lloyd wants Kratos, not knowing that Kratos is really his daddy. Zelos figures this out, and decides to confront Kratos, who somehow manages to convince Zelos to seduce Lloyd instead.

Comments

[fairyv]

Half my mind is thinking, "awwww"....

The other half is thinking that Kratos shouldn't give up his day job! That's, like, the worst parenting ever! ^__^

[diamondust]

Kratos means well. But yeah, he sucks. XD

[daruki]

Win.
^Like she'd be expected to say anything else

No but seriously, it was awesome. I really admire how open you made it- it was basically "y'know what, here are the more popular males of the series, and really, deep deep down, it's just a big orgy of anyone's choice." XD; Like one of these really complicated love circles (more known as triangle, when with less sides), but it's full of lulz and denials and wuts to spice it up. XD
^Probably makes no sense but eh

There were a few spelling mistakes and typos here and there, but contrasted to how you wrote it, it's barely noticeable. I love the biting sarcasm and Zerozero's utter lack of wit on select occasions, not to mention how they drown in denial when confronted with their own 'issues'. XDD

KEEP PIMPIN' THEM TOS FICS!~ 8DDD ♥ -brick'd for excessive fangirlism in public-

[diamondust]

Sorry about the typos, I really should be using a beta reader. Anyone who is reading this willing to put up with me? >.>

But I'm glad you like it! I had alot of fun writing it. I almost labeled the whole thing 'crack', just cause...c'mon. XD Gotta have a sense of humor.

I'll admit this was probably fueled by all the really bad Kratos/Lloyd I keep seeing around.

[fairyv]

Hey, I'll beta! It might actually get me reading stuff again!

You have to choose a required level of pickiness with me though, remember?!

-__^

[diamondust]

Alright! I will contact you the next time I need help. It might be awhile, though.

And I don't need you to be too picky. Just fix the stuff I might have missed. I have a problem with tense changes, and silly typos most of the time.

[littlelinor]

.... oh hell.
I laughed so much.
Awesome.