god my maya is back! your words echo volumes through my mind. I know this is gonna sound weird, but can you give me an image for what you're feeling. describe an image in detail about this. without saying "I feel" take an image for this emotion and just describe that image with words. It'll make you a better writer. And it'll help you channel and organize your emotions. watch I'll give it a go.
the dark moon rises. suprisingly it has no shine. All there is is dark sky, with a shadow rising up slowly. If I wasn't fixated on that tiny shadow light years away I wouldn't have noticed it was the moon. But the stars wink as the moon passes as if flirting with death itself. no glow from the moon, but a moon drained of it's manifigence by a gigantic silver facet.
kinda a bad example... but an example nonetheless... come on maya!!! i love you and things will get better I promise.
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I wanted to make you laugh and detour your focus from the matter at hand. I love you.
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the dark moon rises.
suprisingly it has no shine.
All there is is dark sky, with a shadow
rising up slowly.
If I wasn't fixated on that tiny shadow
light years away I wouldn't have noticed
it was the moon.
But the stars wink as the moon passes
as if flirting with death itself.
no glow from the moon, but a moon drained
of it's manifigence by a gigantic silver facet.
kinda a bad example... but an example nonetheless... come on maya!!! i love you and things will get better I promise.
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