Waste of a Waste. [Tsuna-centric!deathfic. Osh--]

Sep 27, 2009 01:27

Title: Waste of a Waste
Author: the_lady_lamb
Genre: Katekyo Hitman Reborn!
Sub-genre: Romance/Fluff/Angst/Death
Summary: "He tries to say goodbye. Just in case." The last week of Sawada Tsunayoshi's life is relatively normally, excepting the fact that Reborn's teachings have a tendency to make a lasting impression on his students. [TYL!verse]
Rated: R for ( Read more... )

series: katekyo hitman reborn!, genre: angst, rating: r, genre: romance, character: sawada tsunayoshi

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yamamotokun80 September 27 2009, 09:37:31 UTC
very good...
made me sad *keeps tears*...

love the last day...
"Yamamoto is the first to retaliate. The bullet that clips his chin is the same that buries itself in Tsuna’s shoulder. Overdramatic, he thinks. How frivolously theatrical. Even if it does make him look cool."
- i LOVE that part to the extreme!

just asking... is the day of tsuna's death still Tsuna's POV or Yamamoto's POV...

I'm not that good in POV's...
sorry if this comment disturbs you...

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tothe_slaughter September 27 2009, 16:40:32 UTC
Oh, no, not at all! I'm always delighted to get comments, regardless of their content. I love that you enjoyed this so much; Tsuna's death is still in his own POV.

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rinhail September 27 2009, 13:15:23 UTC
This is just pure brilliance! I knew from the summary that it was going to break my heart, but I didn't know it'd hurt this much. I guess its because of the genre of the series. One of the main characters is going to die sooner or later. They always do.

Let me stop, because I'm getting depressed. Back on topic, I enjoyed this immensely. Your writing is top-notch! And you kept me hooked right to the very last word. :D

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tothe_slaughter September 27 2009, 16:58:02 UTC
Thank you so much for all of your praise and emotion...! I love being able to draw out of people what I seem to have successfully drawn out of you -- thank you for reading this and sharing your thoughts. :3

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waterbaby12us September 27 2009, 13:44:20 UTC
Wow, very beautifully written....

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tothe_slaughter September 27 2009, 16:58:32 UTC
Thank you very much for saying so!

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noodlesticks September 27 2009, 15:16:20 UTC
Oh I really liked this.

Just when I was so happy for Tsuna and Kyoko you ninja'd me with both Reborn's and Tsuna's death (though I knew it was coming, it doesn't hurt any less ;__;)

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tothe_slaughter September 27 2009, 17:00:20 UTC
I'm sorry! D: I hope it's a hurt you can at least somewhat enjoy, if only from the perspective that it doesn't look like it'll happen in the universe we're familiar with. I'm really glad you liked it overall, though -- thank you for the comment and the praise. It really makes it feel like writing it was a worthwhile endeavor. xD;

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akumugan September 29 2009, 01:25:55 UTC
DITTO!;___; there, that's the words I'd want to use.

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aradiantsun September 27 2009, 20:43:07 UTC
I AM SO EXTREMELY SAD I WAS NOT THE FIRST TO GET TO READ AND LEAVE YOU LOVE FOR THIS FIC. T^T/

BAW. Lamb. Seriously. My heart is so broken now. The juxtaposition of Kyoko's consent to marry Tsuna against his burning the note on Reborn's alter.... oh man, you killed me. This was so sad but perfect. Suiting.

Yamamoto, Ryohei, and Gokudera were all so brilliantly in character. But it was Yamamoto throughout this whole piece that stood out to me. My urge to cuddle Gokudera = risen. And thanks for throwing me a bone by giving Haru a cameo. ♥

Amazing as always, my dear. There are so many lines that stick out to me, and I want to stroke them tenderly because they're so fitting to the characters. Thanks for writing this, and doing it for me. *hugs forever*

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