Blurbs for Anne Mini

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I've got two versions of blurbs here. The blurb should be between 200 and 250 words, and both of these are. Any feedback is welcome, as well as your vote for the first or the second one. It turns out, writing a blurb is a lot like writing a query. But since it isn't called a query, it's easier to write. Go figure!

Version one:
I took stock of my

Comments

[loupnoir]

Most blurbs I've read are written in third person.

The second paragraph in the third person version is missing some kind of link that tells the reader a little more, not much, about the connection between the pact and the homeless condition. I kept backing up to see if I'd missed something.

Intriguing!

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Thank you :)