[Fic] It's Spring

Sep 03, 2007 16:13

Title: It's Spring ( Read more... )

my fic, bleach

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touchyourtalala September 4 2007, 01:24:14 UTC
Thank you for your feedback ^__^ For a moment there, I thought no one liked my work.

I like writing the footnotes and I was afraid that the footnotes would be longer than the fic itself.

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artemisms September 3 2007, 19:50:38 UTC
Loooove this XD Short and sweet, but still serious and heavy with emotion. Hmm, sort of an epiphany scene: Bya realizes the strength of his love for Renji and starts to wonder about the future of their relationship.

Oh no, Renji. You're about to get THAT TALK. *cackles*

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touchyourtalala September 4 2007, 01:25:16 UTC
Oh the guy will not know what is coming *evil laughter*

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silverharmony September 5 2007, 00:01:08 UTC
Aww, that was so beautiful and sweet :D

turns to see Renji curled up beside him in the massive bed, with his red hair loose across the pillows and face relaxed in sleep. It hits him then -the sharp and relentless constriction of his heart.

Perfect. ♥

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touchyourtalala September 5 2007, 14:38:54 UTC
Thank you for your feedback! ^__^

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senbonzakura77 September 8 2007, 18:17:02 UTC
LOL. I seriously love those footnotes. :D Priceless..

Hisana had enjoyed watching the sunset from this same spot and he knew when he was handing the funeral preparations, she would like to spend her eternal rest here rather than the cold Kuchiki crypts.

I don't know why, but that line is just brilliant. :)

Excellent story!

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touchyourtalala September 8 2007, 18:44:27 UTC
Thank you for the feedback! ^__^

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kerumica May 21 2008, 12:04:20 UTC
What a great way to start the day :) Loved the story (and the footnotes). Thanks for sharing.

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