A Writing Exercise

Sep 20, 2009 08:37

Wrote this to get out of a stiff. I'll continue it as a side project. Future chapters will be friends-locked, as it will contain smut. I haven't written smut in ages.

Title: Dasha, a Korlanian Tale
Rating: R
Word Count: 3,229

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outonwalkabout September 21 2009, 02:05:38 UTC
Very nice. You have a good style - to the point, direct, but simultaneously able to hold back key information to the right part.

Awesome. I like it - keep going with it :3

I've got three writing projects going on right now - hard to have time to work on them though, what with school and classwork and all :<

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toukenjen September 21 2009, 18:36:14 UTC
Thanks!
I used to be a real fabricator...fill in a lot of space with a bunch of useless, colorful writing....traps of high school english classes.
But I've trimmed a lot and now I can't even write like I used to...which is good, I guess. I think it's doing well for me. But it wavers my confidence a little bit.

With this, now I have 2 writing projects. School starts this week, so.....I'll see, XDDD

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runninwild04 September 21 2009, 08:51:15 UTC
ah i'm very curious to see where the story leads now... can't wait!

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thecheshirehare September 21 2009, 17:35:03 UTC
:D please say there will be more!

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toukenjen September 21 2009, 18:36:36 UTC
Definitely!

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