Comments | tourofduty: first attempt. failed hard. oh so hard. fuck.

tourofduty

first attempt. failed hard. oh so hard. fuck.

Feb 08, 2008 11:30

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sports: football (us), otp: peyton manning/tom brady, writing: fic

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tourofduty February 9 2008, 02:28:15 UTC

Thank you so much. :) I'm really glad you enjoyed. I'm just such a paranoid idiot about posting my fic in places.

rhr_noir February 8 2008, 18:54:06 UTC

This was amazing. Maybe I'm being stereotypical in saying that Gisele doesn't strike me as a particularly "deep" thinker, but this was just brilliant.

tourofduty February 9 2008, 02:28:48 UTC

I think I've given Gisele a little too much credit but not a lot is known about her so she may surprise us with just how smart she is. But thank you so much for enjoying!

YAY. goodbutfallen February 8 2008, 19:13:30 UTC

This was amazing. Seriously.
I loved the extended use of water images to describe the situations.
The pictures at the start were a great way of introduction. This story made me really happy. Thank you.

Re: YAY. tourofduty February 9 2008, 02:29:25 UTC

Oh gosh, this was such a sweet comment. I'm really happy that the story made YOU happy. I love adding pictures because I think they're always such a nice spice to stories. Thank you!

reginaw February 8 2008, 20:02:59 UTC

that's really wonderful writing... very sad and real. Makes me wonder what happened next?

tourofduty February 9 2008, 02:29:53 UTC

Thank you. :) I'm thinking about going with a sequel, but my writer's block usually comes fast and hard after I write something for a new pairing.

jess_the1 February 8 2008, 21:33:58 UTC

O.O That was amazing! I like that it was form Gisele's pov, not something you see every day. The pictur was a nice touch as well.

tourofduty February 9 2008, 02:30:26 UTC

Thank you! Despite her irritating qualities, I love Gisele.