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JUST SO YA KNOW, I'M GOING TO FAIL SO EPICALLY AT LEAVING THE REVIEW YOU DESERVE prettyparadox February 11 2008, 07:56:40 UTC
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LAAAAAAAAAAAALALALLAA.../CONTINUES MASHING KEYBOARD WHILE ATTEMPTING TO GATHER THOUGHTS AND HEART AND CRAP TOGETHER.KDJF;SLAKJL;ADFSKJL;DFSJL;DSAFKJL;ADFSJKL;

The strawberry blonde haired girl, the glued belt, the dishwashing soap, TOM'S STUPID VENEREAL DISEASE THAT HE CONTRACTED FROM FUCKING OTHER NFL PLAYERS (H0RRRRRRRRR), THE STEEEEEEETSON, THE HAND JOB IN A MOVING VEHICLE, THE SHAMPOOOOOOOOOOOOOO.

AFDSKJL;DFSAJKL;ASDF THE SEX GOES FROM BAD TO WORSE, AND YET I LOVED. EVERY. SINGLE. FUCKED UP. SCENE. BECAUSE IT'S SO P/T. THEY'VE HAD TO WORK FOR EVERYTHING, SO IT'S NOT LIKE THE SEX GODS WERE GOING TO CUT THEM A BREAK.

No planets align and no stars burst and there's no declaration of love. There's only the way he collapses against Tom, the way Tom's fingers stroke across his shoulders in an almost gentle touch, and there's only the sound of the air conditioning kicking back.GUHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHDAFS,,. THEY'RE PERFECT IN THEIR ( ... )

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Re: JUST SO YA KNOW, I'M GOING TO FAIL SO EPICALLY AT LEAVING THE REVIEW YOU DESERVE tourofduty February 11 2008, 18:48:58 UTC
I SEE YOUR KEYBOARD MASHING AND I RAISE YOU THE FACT THAT I'M BLUSHING LIKE AN IDIOT AND MAYBE GIGGLING A LITTLE BIT BECAUSE WELL I WROTE THIS FOR YOU SO NATURALLY I AM BEYOND EXCITED THAT YOU ENJOYED IT.

L M F A O TOM IS A FUCKING SKANK, OKAY. HE'S LETTING EVERYONE HIT THAT ASS SO IT'S ONLY NATURAL PEYTON GET SOMETHING.

BUT OMG THANK YOU SO MUCH. I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHAT TO SAY BECAUSE YOU ARE SO CUTE AND I AM JUST SO THANKFUL AND BAD!SEX IS THE BEST KIND OF SEX EVAR. EVAR EVAR.

♥ ♥ &hearts: ♥ FOR YOU!!

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be_a_rebel February 11 2008, 10:29:47 UTC
I...I don't even know these guys and still......holy crap. Wow.

This is perfect. It's reminded me of why I love fanfic so much...the freshness of it all and how every person can write in their own unusual and beautiful manner.

Oh, the constant failed attempts but there's still that undercurrent of want......you broke me.

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tourofduty February 11 2008, 18:49:40 UTC
Oh my God... Thank you so much! This is such a big fucking compliment and it means so much to me. Wow. Haha. I'm sort of speechless because that is just really, really fucking SWEET. Thank you again! ♥

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jess_the1 February 11 2008, 11:39:36 UTC
O.O Totally amazing! What a nice way to start my day.;)

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tourofduty February 11 2008, 18:49:47 UTC
Hee, thank you!

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fleshuncovered February 11 2008, 12:47:29 UTC
YESSSSS i love the misses and diseases[cause tom is a whooooooooooooore] and it leads to an awsome ending
awesome

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tourofduty February 11 2008, 18:50:02 UTC
Hobag!Tom is the carrier of everything but hee, thank you!

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prettyparadox February 11 2008, 13:50:22 UTC
HUH SO FIRST THING WHEN I WAKE UP, I READ THIS STORY AGAIN. AND PERHAPS TOM'S JUST BAD AT GETTING SOME SEXY TIME (CONTRARY TO POPULAR BELIEF), AND PEYTON'S THE ONLY ONE PATIENT ENOUGH TO WORK THROUGH TOM'S CRAP.

UMM HAI. YOU MADE ME MORNIN' (AGAIN). <4!

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tourofduty February 11 2008, 18:50:40 UTC
L M F A O TOM IS HORRIBLE. I REFUSE TO BELIEVE HE'S AS SUAVE AS PEOPLE THINK HE IS. I'VE SEEN THOSE PRESS CONFERENCES, GODDAMMIT.

OH HAI BB I'M GLAD I'M GLAD<3

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